Paragraph Revision

Today we worked on paragraph revision, starting by editing and revising a paragraph from an Of Mice and Men essay as a group. 5th period students then moved on to a similar activity on their own with a different paragraph, while 1st period students began working on revising a paragraph from their own paper (which they should finish for homework).  The students' Of Mice and Men essays were handed back at the end of the period; they need to bring these with them to class on Monday.